I'm Back !!!
I'm Back......
The Question is Where and Why ??
Ok.. to make things a little more clear... IF all goes well.. and it will.. I am going to have a lot of breathing space from tommorrow. The Phase 1 of my tenure has paid of rich dividends...
The "more later" route I adopted was definitely not an excuse and so I'm Back to tell u a nice little story..
One Fine Morning on a November Day
Out came the sun with a shining ray,
So Bright & So White..
It was filling up the twilight.
It Bought with it,
a bundle of happiness
a long lost divinity
The world around was bound to change,
The Birds would sing & the rain would dance,
the air would whistle and the clouds would clap,
The heart would beat and the blood get pumped,
there would be life and there would be glory.
The world would smile and lay the red carpet,
You'd feel light and glide as a feather.
It would be fast,
the feeling would spread,
beyond the known and the unknown lands...
And then,
One fine day, came a dark cloud
ready to lay a long dark shadow over the vast green plain,
the world would turn pale.. and the feeling would revolt,
the brain would subside and the dark side would rise..
Without You..
The World stops turning,
the heart stops singing,
the birds stop chirping,
and the clouds stop moving,
The wind blows, but plain and harsh
where did the message disappear,
why did the turmoil ever happen ??
How in a day did the rain drop freeze,
how in a day did the light turn pale,
how in a day did the blood flow strain,
how in a day so small, did the world turn around ??
how in a day so small, did the world turn around ???
It was once well said,
Love thy neighbour & thy shall love thee,
But, how strong shall the heart beat free, with a stone in the arterie ?
With all this said,
there is still hope,
there shall be life,
there shall still be a reason to smile,
Thy love shall come,
Stronger than ever, bigger, and better,
"Hope" is the thing with feathers- that perches in the soul...
Hope is a waking dream.
...the stars will shine and
the wind shall blow
The heart would beat
and SO SHALL YOU...
The Question is Where and Why ??
Ok.. to make things a little more clear... IF all goes well.. and it will.. I am going to have a lot of breathing space from tommorrow. The Phase 1 of my tenure has paid of rich dividends...
The "more later" route I adopted was definitely not an excuse and so I'm Back to tell u a nice little story..
One Fine Morning on a November Day
Out came the sun with a shining ray,
So Bright & So White..
It was filling up the twilight.
It Bought with it,
a bundle of happiness
a long lost divinity
The world around was bound to change,
The Birds would sing & the rain would dance,
the air would whistle and the clouds would clap,
The heart would beat and the blood get pumped,
there would be life and there would be glory.
The world would smile and lay the red carpet,
You'd feel light and glide as a feather.
It would be fast,
the feeling would spread,
beyond the known and the unknown lands...
And then,
One fine day, came a dark cloud
ready to lay a long dark shadow over the vast green plain,
the world would turn pale.. and the feeling would revolt,
the brain would subside and the dark side would rise..
Without You..
The World stops turning,
the heart stops singing,
the birds stop chirping,
and the clouds stop moving,
The wind blows, but plain and harsh
where did the message disappear,
why did the turmoil ever happen ??
How in a day did the rain drop freeze,
how in a day did the light turn pale,
how in a day did the blood flow strain,
how in a day so small, did the world turn around ??
how in a day so small, did the world turn around ???
It was once well said,
Love thy neighbour & thy shall love thee,
But, how strong shall the heart beat free, with a stone in the arterie ?
With all this said,
there is still hope,
there shall be life,
there shall still be a reason to smile,
Thy love shall come,
Stronger than ever, bigger, and better,
"Hope" is the thing with feathers- that perches in the soul...
Hope is a waking dream.
...the stars will shine and
the wind shall blow
The heart would beat
and SO SHALL YOU...
19 Comments:
PHOD DIYA BE!
well said... and well meant [:)]
By Sunny, at Thursday, August 18, 2005 7:38:00 AM
AAaaawwwww ..... our dear maalu doing poetry.... nice one be... :)
By Sudarshan. A. G., at Thursday, August 18, 2005 8:17:00 AM
Nice one....great imagery...take it up a bit more seriously and we can look forward more and greater work...[:)]
Aashu
By Anonymous, at Thursday, August 18, 2005 8:31:00 AM
hey mallu so finally we got half mallu back...better half still lost somewhr.....n btw GUUUUUUUD POETRY.....pyar aadmi se kya kya karwa deta hia dost...aab tujhe hi dekh lo .... kavi ban gaya...gud goin.......
who else...
Lads...
By Anonymous, at Thursday, August 18, 2005 10:39:00 AM
Thanx yaar..
sunny, sudu, aashu and off course the one and only Lads..
yaar.. dil se likha hain.. masto baat hain ki tumhe achi lagi.. bas baki aage aage dekho hota hain kya.. :):P
By Coolin, at Thursday, August 18, 2005 11:14:00 AM
Hey Malu!
kewl dude!! i like the way u say it ;)
cheers,
saGAR
By sagaRedefined, at Thursday, August 18, 2005 11:38:00 AM
SIMPLY AMAZING........ THAT WAS SURELY NOT UR FIRST POEM.... JUST TOO GOOD DOOD.....
OR PROBABLY AS LADS POINTED OUT.........IT IS THE LOVERIA EFFECT :)
FEELS REAL GOOD READING THIS POST.
ANEESH
By aneesh, at Thursday, August 18, 2005 12:15:00 PM
hey man ! too good ... main soch raha hun aaun tere paas poetry lessons ke liye :P
damn good job ! keep writing and keep loving ;-)
By kpowerinfinity, at Thursday, August 18, 2005 12:53:00 PM
no words...
speech less,simply amazing."Hope is a waking dream.
...the stars will shine and
the wind shall blow
The heart would beat
and SO SHALL YOU..." simply too good.
By Anonymous, at Thursday, August 18, 2005 11:12:00 PM
sas
kya be maalu...mai shayar to nahi
magar aye hasin ...tujhse milke shayari aa gayee....
koi nahi...tere pyar mein koi dark cloud nahi honge..then DFW is thr
chal load nahi hai...peace hai hamesha
By Anonymous, at Friday, August 19, 2005 9:38:00 PM
Oye yeh prakhar sharma ka kuch naam rakho....bahut confusion hoga....mujhe yaad hi nahin aa raha tha ki yeh upar wala comment maine kab kiya tha????
Execute ASAP
JaCkOPoWeR!!
By Prakhar, at Friday, August 19, 2005 11:58:00 PM
man.. kudos to u...if u thot ..of...the rain dancing..and clouds clapping...on ur own..it needs some....gr8 imagination for that..btw such levels of expression will sweep
anybody...of their feet...!
By Abhi, at Saturday, August 20, 2005 10:16:00 PM
2 gud ,dear...i believe u hv poured all ur emotions into this 1 poem.....ever line has an underlying meaning attached to it,its simply brilliant.....keep it up deary[:-)]!!!!!!!
Luv
Aditi
By Anonymous, at Tuesday, August 23, 2005 8:55:00 AM
Thank U
One and all [;)]
Hope i can come up with greater stuff...
KM
By Coolin, at Tuesday, August 23, 2005 10:04:00 PM
@ Dhams..
Thanx yaar.. Mood banaenge ek aur din and likh dalenge phir se dil ki baat :D
@ AAGA
yaar.. that was totally Original when i wrote it.. am not sure whether MJ is out of lyrics now-a-days :D:P
By Coolin, at Monday, August 29, 2005 1:17:00 AM
yaar ab tune bola hai comment likne ko to likh de raha hoon...raat me 4 baje (i mean subah)...poem padhata hai aur expect karta hai ki i'll write something descent....but i'm...surprised na...
nice work...
By Varun, at Thursday, September 01, 2005 3:34:00 PM
yaar lekin ab aur mat likhna...padhni pad jayegi
By Varun, at Thursday, September 01, 2005 3:36:00 PM
BETWEEN IDEA AND REALITY COMES YOUR SHADOW BECAUSE YOU ARE BEHIND SCENES.email puneet.patna@gmail.com
By Anonymous, at Monday, August 07, 2006 11:50:00 AM
PLZ EMAIL ME puneet_patna@rediffmail.com
By Anonymous, at Monday, August 07, 2006 11:53:00 AM
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